[OT] - Requesting Comments for Process Definition and Presentation

[Ilias Lazaridis]

Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
> comp.lang.python / comp.lang.ruby
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> I would like to ask for feedback on the Process Definition and 
> Presentation.
> 
> Essentially this is exactly what I've myself specialized to do.
> 
> But I cannot apply the process to my own system.
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> Your feedback is _very_ important to me.

Based on the summary of the feedback so far, I've focused on one page - 
the main page:

Although it needs a review from a native english speaker, I think that 
this should give now a clear summary, without forcing the reader to 
think very much:

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"
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Reengineering

We can assist you to find your strenghts & weaknesses, your 
opportunities & threats.

We can assist you to find the neccessary changes and the simplest ways 
to implement those changes with minimal effort.

Suggested changes are mostly demonstrated with comparisons or samples. 
Theory involvement is avoided whenever possible. This way you can verify 
change suggestion with a minimal time investment.

We apply a method which works via internet. This method is based 
exclusively on written conversation and is very pragmatic.

Our services are specialized on software-companies. The services use a 
top-down approach which starts from the website, goes to the product, 
the support, the project and can reach the source codes, especially 
within open source projects. The prices for our services start at 250,- €.

We offer a no-cost / no-obligation review of your website. This is the 
simplest way to introduce yourself to our services and to verify our skills.

Just try it - you have nothing to loose!

     Request it via e-mail or via contact form.
"

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Any comments or suggestions are welcome.

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