[OT] - Requesting Comments for Process Definition and Presentation

[Steve Holden]

Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
> Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
> 
>>comp.lang.python / comp.lang.ruby
>>
>>-
>>
>>I would like to ask for feedback on the Process Definition and 
>>Presentation.
>>
>>Essentially this is exactly what I've myself specialized to do.
>>
>>But I cannot apply the process to my own system.
> 
> [...]
> 
> 
>>Your feedback is _very_ important to me.
> 
> 
> Based on the summary of the feedback so far, I've focused on one page - 
> the main page:
> 
> Although it needs a review from a native english speaker, I think that 
> this should give now a clear summary, without forcing the reader to 
> think very much:
> 
> -
> 
> "
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> 
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> -
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> Any comments or suggestions are welcome.
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> .
> 
It certainly reads more like I'd be talking to a human being now.

regards
  Steve
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