[OT] - Requesting Comments for Process Definition and Presentation

[Ilias Lazaridis]

Steve Holden wrote:
> Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
>> Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
>>> comp.lang.python / comp.lang.ruby
>>>
>>> I would like to ask for feedback on the Process Definition and 
>>> Presentation.
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>> Based on the summary of the feedback so far, I've focused on one page 
>> - the main page:
>>
>> Although it needs a review from a native english speaker, I think that 
>> this should give now a clear summary, without forcing the reader to 
>> think very much:
>>
>> "
>> Lazaridis ReEngineering is specialized on System Evaluation and 
>> Reengineering
[...]

>> Our services are specialized on software-companies. The services use a 
> 
>                                for software developers and vendors.
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Our services are specialized for the business domain "software development"

> It certainly reads more like I'd be talking to a human being now.

Very nice.

Thank you for your gentle corrections (i've applied all, exept the one 
above).

> regards
>  Steve

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