Constructive Criticism

jeremiah valerio jeremiahvalerio123 at gmail.com
Thu Jan 9 16:05:23 EST 2014


On Thursday, January 9, 2014 2:54:44 PM UTC-6, Christopher Welborn wrote:
> On 01/08/2014 11:56 PM, jeremiahvalerio123 at gmail.com wrote:
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> > Hi, hows it going I've been self teaching myself python, and i typed up this small script now i know its not the best the coding is not the best but i would like to know of ways to make a small script like this better so all constructive critisim is Welcome.
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> > Here is the link to the code
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> >     " http://pastebin.com/5uCFR2pz "
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> I'm not sure if someone already pointed this out, but imports only need
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> to be done once. Usually at the beginning of the file, but not always.
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> In your case I would say yes, at the beginning.
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> import sys
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> import time
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> def countdown(seconds):'
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>      # start at 'seconds' and count down with a for-loop
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>      for i in range(seconds, 0, -1):
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>          # print the current second (i)
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>          print('closing in {} seconds.'.format(i))
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>          # sleep for one second (no need to import time again).
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>          time.sleep(1)
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> # Example usage:
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> print('hello')
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> # Prints the countdown.
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> countdown(10)
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> sys.exit(0)
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> -- 
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> - Christopher Welborn <cjwelborn at live.com>
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>    http://welbornprod.com

Mr.Peter Otten did 

"- You should import modules just once, at the beginning of your script. "

                                                   -Peter Otten
With his help this is what i have now

def countdown():
    import time
    for seconds_left in reversed(range(1, 10)):
        print("Closing in", seconds_left, "seconds")
        time.sleep(1)
    exit()

if user_input == "yes" :
    user_input = input("\nGreat what should we talk about?\nSports\nWeather")
elif user_input == "no" :
    print("\nAlrighty bye have a nice day! :)\n\nClosing in 10.")
    countdown()



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