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Scott David Daniels
scott.daniels at acm.org
Fri Jan 27 16:44:19 EST 2006
Steve Holden wrote:
> How does
>
> http://beta.python.org/about/beginners/
>
> look?
>
> regards
> Steve
I agree that links need better contrast (if you are taking over the
page coloring; you might consider avoiding that as well as font spec).
In the initial paragraph:
Welcome! Are you completely new to programming? If _not_ ....
I'd add something in the words to indicate what to do if you _are_
"completely new to programming." Perhaps simply this:
Welcome! Are you completely new to programming?
If so, click on _this_link_. If _not_ ....
Paragraph 3 in "Why Python":
Some people uppose because Python ...
I'd prefer the word "suppose."
and later in that paragraph, I'd change:
... extensions that provide compact numerical solutions
to:
... extensions that provide compact high-speed numerical solutions
--Scott David Daniels
scott.daniels at acm.org
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