[pypy-commit] extradoc extradoc: Rephrase

[rguillebert]

Author: Romain Guillebert <romain.py at gmail.com>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r5369:3ffd361a4541
Date: 2014-07-22 14:28 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/3ffd361a4541/

Log:	Rephrase

diff --git a/talk/ep2014/status/talk.pdf b/talk/ep2014/status/talk.pdf
index 1ad85fa0fe34a4a237ca405797b9dbd596e54ece..aa6078c72592f3c1704408ce9759135c24a70c28
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diff --git a/talk/ep2014/status/talk.rst b/talk/ep2014/status/talk.rst
--- a/talk/ep2014/status/talk.rst
+++ b/talk/ep2014/status/talk.rst
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 
 - STM, 2nd call: 3'000 $ of 80'000 $ (4%)
 
-- thank to all donors!
+- Thanks to all donors!
 
 Commercial support
 ------------------
@@ -166,23 +166,23 @@
 
 - ~7.5x faster than CPython on ARM
 
-- thanks to Raspberry-Pi foundation
+- Thanks to the Raspberry-Pi foundation
 
-- distributed as part of Raspbian OS
+- Distributed as part of Raspbian OS
 
 
 numpy
 -----
 
-- as usual, in-progress
+- As usual, in-progress
 
 - 2336 passing tests out of 3265
 
   * http://buildbot.pypy.org/numpy-status/latest.html
 
-- just try it
+- Just try it
 
-- no scipy :-/
+- No scipy :-/
 
 
 py3k
@@ -192,9 +192,9 @@
 
 - 3.3: branch started, in-progress
 
-- some missing optimizations
+- Some missing optimizations
 
-  * getting better
+  * Getting better
 
 
 CFFI