[pypy-commit] extradoc extradoc: (confluecne) typos

[fijal]

Author: Maciej Fijalkowski <fijall at gmail.com>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r4035:15ad7db9d445
Date: 2012-01-16 00:32 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/15ad7db9d445/

Log:	(confluecne) typos

diff --git a/blog/draft/numpy-internship.rst b/blog/draft/numpy-internship.rst
--- a/blog/draft/numpy-internship.rst
+++ b/blog/draft/numpy-internship.rst
@@ -1,31 +1,31 @@
 
-Hello everyone.
+Hello, everyone
 
-I would like to inform everyone that there is a very interesting opportunity
+I would like to inform you that there is a very interesting opportunity
 for doing an internship at `NCAR`_ in the lovely town of `Boulder`_, situated
-on the foothils of Rocky Mountains. Before you read on, make sure you are:
+on the foothils of Rocky Mountains. Before you read on, make sure:
 
-* A student of a US University, who is legally eglibale to work in the US.
+* are a student of a US University, who is legally egligible to work in the US
 
-* At least finishing second year this year.
+* are at least finishing second year this year,
 
-* Apply before February 3rd.
+* apply before February 3rd.
 
-The internship itself is to focus on using PyPy (in some way) to provide
-a high performance numeric kernel for an atmospheric model and measuring how
-fast we can go. This is very well in line with what the current effort on
+The internship itself will focus on using PyPy (in some way) to provide
+a high performance numeric kernel for an atmospheric model, and measuring how
+fast we can go. This is very much in line with what the current effort on
 NumPy in PyPy is about. The internship will be mentored by `Davide del Vento`_
 and I hope to have some influence over where it goes myself :-)
 
-Few interesting links:
+A few interesting links:
 
 * `program website`_
 
 * `internship proposal`_ - note that the actual roadmap is very flexible, as
   long as it's numeric kernel of an atmospheric model using PyPy.
 
-Fell free to contact Davide for details about the proposal and `pypy-dev`_ or
-me directly for details about pypy
+Feel free to contact Davide for details about the proposal and `pypy-dev`_ or
+me directly for details about PyPy.
 
 .. _`Davide del Vento`: http://www.linkedin.com/in/delvento
 .. _`NCAR`: http://ncar.ucar.edu/