[pypy-svn] r23164 - pypy/extradoc/sprintinfo/pycon06

[mwh at codespeak.net]

Author: mwh
Date: Thu Feb  9 13:19:02 2006
New Revision: 23164

Modified:
   pypy/extradoc/sprintinfo/pycon06/sprint-announcement.txt
Log:
small fixes.  maybe the "Network, Food, Currency" section is a bit over the top
given that most (all?) attendees will have been at the conference...


Modified: pypy/extradoc/sprintinfo/pycon06/sprint-announcement.txt
==============================================================================
--- pypy/extradoc/sprintinfo/pycon06/sprint-announcement.txt	(original)
+++ pypy/extradoc/sprintinfo/pycon06/sprint-announcement.txt	Thu Feb  9 13:19:02 2006
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@
   - Implement new features and improve the 'py' lib and py.test 
     which are heavily used by PyPy (doctests/test selection/...).
 
-  - generally experiment with PyPy - e.g. regarding
-    transparent distribution of objects, hacking with 
-    co-routines and stackless features at application level 
+  - Generally experiment with PyPy -- for example, play with
+    transparent distribution of objects or coroutines and stackless
+    features at application level.
 
   - Have fun!
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 The PyPy sprint will from from Monday February 27th until Thursday
 March 2nd 2006. Hours will be from 10:00 until people have had enough.
 
-Network, Food, currency 
+Network, Food, Currency 
 ------------------------ 
 
 Currency is the US Dollar.
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 we can probably accommodate a few people with wired-only connectivity.
 
 Power is 120v through US-style sockets -- Europeans will need to
-remember bringing their adaptors!
+remember to bring their adaptors!
 
 Registration, etc.
 ------------------ 
@@ -73,9 +73,9 @@
 introduce yourself and post a note that you want to come.  Feel free
 to ask any questions there!
 
-There is a separate `PyCon 06 people`_ page tracking who is
-already thought to come.  If you have commit rights on codespeak then
-you can modify yourself a checkout of
+There is a separate `PyCon 06 people`_ page tracking who is already
+planning to come.  If you have commit rights on codespeak then you can
+modify yourself a checkout of
 
   http://codespeak.net/svn/pypy/extradoc/sprintinfo/pycon06/people.txt