[pypy-svn] r3659 - pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations

[hpk at codespeak.net]

Author: hpk
Date: Thu Apr  1 20:56:00 2004
New Revision: 3659

Modified:
   pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt
Log:
some more rephrasing on the consortium restructuring 



Modified: pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt
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--- pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt	(original)
+++ pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt	Thu Apr  1 20:56:00 2004
@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@
 **Action: in first instance no workpackages should be removed 
 as savings should be obtained through economizing the work planning.**
 
-The consortium has now revisited each work package description 
-and has provided a much better and more consistent work plan.  We were
-able to retain all Workpackages and were more specific 
-about the exact deliverables and tasks. It was also necessary to
-reduce the scope of some of the work packages.  Each of the partners
-in the consortium now has to accept a much higher risk and responsbility 
-for producing all deliverables with the reduced resources. 
+The consortium has now revisited each work package description and has
+provided a much better, more consistent and more detailed work plan.  We
+were able to retain all Workpackages but were more specific about the
+exact deliverables and tasks. It was also necessary to reduce the scope
+of some of the work packages.  But primarily each of the partners in the 
+consortium now has to accept a much higher risk and responsbility for 
+efficiently producing all deliverables with the reduced resources. 
 
 The consortium intends to interact early and often with specific
 communities and individuals. This should effectively mobilise our resources.