[pypy-svn] rev 1966 - pypy/trunk/doc/funding

[pedronis at codespeak.net]

Author: pedronis
Date: Wed Oct 15 15:20:07 2003
New Revision: 1966

Modified:
   pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B0.1_summary.txt
Log:
fixed nits from Laura.


Modified: pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B0.1_summary.txt
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--- pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B0.1_summary.txt	(original)
+++ pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B0.1_summary.txt	Wed Oct 15 15:20:07 2003
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 	 
 	 The full title of the Proposal is 'PyPy: Researching a highly
          flexible and modular language platform and implementing it by
-         leveraging the Open Source Python language and community'.
+         leveraging the Open Source Python Language and Community'.
 
 **Proposal acronym:**
 
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@
      software systems and services, and embedded software.
 
      Our primary Scientific objective is to investigate novel
-     techniques (AOP code generation and abstract interpretation
-     -based) for the implementation of practical dynamic languages,
-     breaking the compromise between flexibility, simplicity and
-     performance trade-offs and expanding the range (small-to-large)
-     of directly supportable runtime platforms.
+     techniques (based on Aspect-Oriented-Programming code generation
+     and abstract interpretation) for the implementation of practical
+     dynamic languages, breaking the compromise between flexibility,
+     simplicity and performance trade-offs and expanding the range
+     (small-to-large) of directly supportable runtime platforms.
 
      Our primary Methological objective is to showcase a novel
      software engineering process, Sprint Driven Development.  This is