[pypy-svn] rev 1674 - pypy/trunk/doc/funding

[ale at codespeak.net]

Author: ale
Date: Fri Oct 10 17:50:38 2003
New Revision: 1674

Modified:
   pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B3.0_impact.txt
Log:
Some stupid, but important typos

Modified: pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B3.0_impact.txt
==============================================================================
--- pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B3.0_impact.txt	(original)
+++ pypy/trunk/doc/funding/B3.0_impact.txt	Fri Oct 10 17:50:38 2003
@@ -22,8 +22,9 @@
 Potential impact
 ===================
 
-Thy successful execution of the PyPy project will deliver a practical usefull 
-implementation of a Very-High-Level, Object-Oriented, programming language. 
+The successful execution of the PyPy project will deliver a practical usefull 
+implementation of a Very-High-Level, Object-Oriented, Open Source programming 
+language. 
 
 This will impact software development in several important ways.
 
@@ -31,9 +32,9 @@
 
     The time to market will be reduced.
  
-    The cost of software maintenance will be removed.
+    The cost of software maintenance will be reduced.
 
-    Reduce barriers to market a product
+    Reduce barriers to market a product.
 
 
 The development methods of the PyPy project will prove that using Sprints,