[pycon-za] Revised design from Andrew

Simon Cross simon.cross at praekeltfoundation.org
Fri Jun 15 12:02:01 CEST 2012


On Fri, Jun 15, 2012 at 9:52 AM, Jonathan Endersby
<jonathan.endersby at praekeltconsulting.com> wrote:
> Something I just spotted, "It is aimed at everyone…" is a bit clunky, why
> not just go with "Aimed at everyone in…"

That sentence is phrased a bit oddly but I'm not sure just dropping
the "It is" helps. What about "A conference for everyone in..."?


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