[Inpycon] finalising the sponsorship amounts

[Noufal Ibrahim]

On Tue, Feb 01 2011, Anand Balachandran Pillai wrote:


[...]

> 1. Provide at least 2 contact numbers. In case one is not able to answer,
> another one is a backup.
> 2. Make sure contact at in.pycon.org is aliased to only the list of folks
> doing/supporting the sponsorship effort. Try to keep this list to 3 or
> shorter.

Valid points. 


> Few grammar mistakes I found
>
> 1. The sentence "Your sponsorship..." belongs to the 3rd para  after the 2nd
> line,
> not where it is right now.
> 2. Change "Pycon India organizers" ->  "Pycon India organizing committee" in
> 3rd para.
> 3. Change "relies" -> "rely" on 3rd para.
> 4. Do either 2 and 3 or Change this entire line
>
> "The PyCon India organizers and the IPSS relies on  corporate sponsors to
> make the conference a big success and happen every year"
>
> to
>
> "The PyCon India organizing committe and the IPSS require the support of
> corporate sponsors to make sure that the event happens smoothly and
> efficiently
> every year. Please sponsor and support Pycon India 2011 to make it a grand
> success".
>
> or something similar. The current line looks vaguely worded.

[...]

I've already sent this out to the people who contacted me. I'll make the
changes when we put up the 2011 website and related material. 

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