Constructive Criticism
Mark Lawrence
breamoreboy at yahoo.co.uk
Thu Jan 9 02:03:00 EST 2014
On 09/01/2014 06:16, jeremiah valerio wrote:
> On Thursday, January 9, 2014 12:09:17 AM UTC-6, Ben Finney wrote:
>> jeremiahvalerio123 at gmail.com writes:
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>>> Hi, hows it going I've been self teaching myself python
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>> Welcome to Python, and to this discussion forum!
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>>> and i typed up this small script now i know its not the best the
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>>> coding is not the best but i would like to know of ways to make a
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>>> small script like this better so all constructive critisim is Welcome.
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>> Some constructive criticism:
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>> * Please make an effort to write readable English here. A run-on
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>> sentence like the above makes it seem as though you don't care enough
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>> for our help to make your message easily readable.
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>> * Please paste the code in your actual message, rather than directing to
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>> an ephemeral website. This is so that the discussion will always have
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>> the code for context when later readers view it.
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>> Once you re-post your program and describe its purpose, I'm sure there
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>> will be some responses giving feedback.
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>> --
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>> \ “My girlfriend has a queen sized bed; I have a court jester |
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>> `\ sized bed. It's red and green and has bells on it, and the ends |
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>> _o__) curl up.” —Steven Wright |
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>> Ben Finney
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> yea sorry about this screw up "i know its not the best the coding is not the best but" and i'm new to forums never posted so i will take all your input and re-post maybe later thank you.
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Before you repost would you please read and action this
https://wiki.python.org/moin/GoogleGroupsPython to prevent us seeing the
double line spacing above, thanks.
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what you can do for our language.
Mark Lawrence
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