[Python-checkins] r73154 - peps/trunk/pep-0374.txt

[brett.cannon]

Author: brett.cannon
Date: Tue Jun  2 21:13:32 2009
New Revision: 73154

Log:
Minor grammatical typos found by Eric Smith and R. David Murray.

Modified:
   peps/trunk/pep-0374.txt

Modified: peps/trunk/pep-0374.txt
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--- peps/trunk/pep-0374.txt	(original)
+++ peps/trunk/pep-0374.txt	Tue Jun  2 21:13:32 2009
@@ -1491,13 +1491,13 @@
 lightning talk <http://pycon.blip.tv/file/1947231/>`_ where Brett
 Cannon lists these exact reasons; talk started at 3:45). First, git's
 Windows support is the weakest out of the three DVCSs being considered
-which unacceptable as Python needs to support development on any
+which is unacceptable as Python needs to support development on any
 platform it runs on. Since Python runs on Windows and some people do
 develop on the platform it needs solid support. And while git's
 support is improving, as of this moment it is the weakest by a large
-enough margin to warrant it a problem.
+enough margin to warrant considering it a problem.
 
-Two, and just as important as the first issue, is that the Python
+Second, and just as important as the first issue, is that the Python
 core developers liked git the least out of the three DVCS options by a
 wide margin. If you look at the following table you will see the
 results of a survey taken of the core developers and how by a large