[py-svn] r7046 - py/dist/doc

[hpk at codespeak.net]

Author: hpk
Date: Tue Oct 19 21:43:13 2004
New Revision: 7046

Modified:
   py/dist/doc/execnet.txt
Log:
fixed the execnet history slightly. 



Modified: py/dist/doc/execnet.txt
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--- py/dist/doc/execnet.txt	(original)
+++ py/dist/doc/execnet.txt	Tue Oct 19 21:43:13 2004
@@ -20,17 +20,19 @@
 
 Some of you may have seen the pygame-based editor **shpy**
 that Armin Rigo, Holger Krekel and Michael Hudson demonstrated
-at EuroPython 2004. Is is a multiline interactive python 
-environment which allows multiple remote users to have their 
-own cursors and shared interaction with the graphical shell
-which can execute python code, of course. 
+at EuroPython 2004 during the lightning talks. It is a
+multiline interactive python environment which allows multiple
+remote users to have their own cursors and shared interaction
+with the graphical shell which can execute python code, of
+course. 
 
 **py.execnet** extracts and refines the basic mechanism that
 was originally developed from the one-week hack that is the
-current **shpy**.  No, its is not released yet but hopefully
+current **shpy**.  No, the latter is not released but hopefully
 Armin, Holger and others get to do a second one-week sprint at
 some point to be able to release it. If you are interested
-drop them a note. This is real fun. 
+drop them a note. This is real fun if you are willing to 
+bend your mind a bit. 
 
 A new view on distributed execution
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