[pypy-commit] extradoc extradoc: Tweaks

[arigo]

Author: Armin Rigo <arigo at tunes.org>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r5144:8b18c872d336
Date: 2014-01-28 17:58 +0100
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/8b18c872d336/

Log:	Tweaks

diff --git a/talk/fosdem2014/pypy-stm.pdf b/talk/fosdem2014/pypy-stm.pdf
index 68969cdc285bd7404a257fee458f30e30793003e..78ca0e1e4a6f24dd1d5ebb89e45fe4c8f6bf95e8
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diff --git a/talk/fosdem2014/pypy-stm.rst b/talk/fosdem2014/pypy-stm.rst
--- a/talk/fosdem2014/pypy-stm.rst
+++ b/talk/fosdem2014/pypy-stm.rst
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
 * If the Twisted reactor (say) was modified to start a pool of threads,
   and to run all events in "``with atomic:``"
 
-* ...Then the end result is the same, for any Twisted program
+* ...Then the end result is the same, for any Twisted application
 
 
 Behind-the-scene threads
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
   Python run on several cores
 
 * The "``with atomic:``" means that the semantics of the Twisted
-  program didn't change
+  application didn't change
 
 
 Summary (optimistic)
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
 
 * If you are using Twisted...
 
-* Just wait and your program will run on multiple cores ``:-)``
+* ...Your program will run on multiple cores ``:-)``
 
 
 Conflicts
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
 Scope
 =====
 
-* Twisted / Eventlet / Stackless / etc.: event-driven programming
+* Twisted / Tornado / Eventlet / Stackless / etc.: event-driven programming
 
 * Any program computing something complicated, e.g. over all items in
   a dictionary, occasionally updating a shared state, etc.