[pypy-commit] extradoc extradoc: typos

[cfbolz]

Author: Carl Friedrich Bolz <cfbolz at gmx.de>
Branch: extradoc
Changeset: r4441:3dd4c9c364e4
Date: 2012-08-07 08:06 +0200
http://bitbucket.org/pypy/extradoc/changeset/3dd4c9c364e4/

Log:	typos

diff --git a/talk/dls2012/paper.tex b/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
--- a/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
+++ b/talk/dls2012/paper.tex
@@ -1034,8 +1034,8 @@
 
 Loop invariant code motion optimizations are completely
 standard~\cite{muchnick_advanced_1997}. Therefore, the effects that our
-optimization achieves is not in any way new. However, we think that achieving
-it as described in this paper is simpler than explicit algorithms.
+optimization achieves are not in any way new. However, we think that achieving
+them in the way described in this paper is simpler than writing explicit algorithms.
 
 \revc{
 The discussion of LuaJIT is unsatisfying.  It's not clear to me from that one