[pypy-svn] r3792 - pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations

[hpk at codespeak.net]

Author: hpk
Date: Mon Apr  5 22:07:59 2004
New Revision: 3792

Modified:
   pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt
Log:
changed "more specific" to "more selective" to hint stronger
at the fact that we don'T cover the same ground as before



Modified: pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt
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--- pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt	(original)
+++ pypy/trunk/doc/funding/negotiations/responses_2nd_april.txt	Mon Apr  5 22:07:59 2004
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 
 The consortium has revisited each work package description and has
 provided a more consistent and more detailed work plan.  We
-were able to retain all Workpackages but had to be more specific about the
+were able to retain all Workpackages but had to be more selective about the
 exact deliverables and tasks. This lead to an economized and tightened 
 work planning.  
 
@@ -56,8 +56,6 @@
 relies heavily on interacting early and often with specific communities
 and individuals to effectively mobilise our resources.
 
-XXXFIXME:  Do we say we reduced scope or not?? lac+ hpk-
-
 **Action: provide fully completed and quality checked CPFs.**
 
 We have completed and improved the CPFs.  The project office's feedback