[pypy-svn] rev 1816 - pypy/trunk/doc/funding

[hpk at codespeak.net]

Author: hpk
Date: Sun Oct 12 21:53:06 2003
New Revision: 1816

Modified:
   pypy/trunk/doc/funding/abstract.asc
Log:
some tweaks (as suggested by laura)



Modified: pypy/trunk/doc/funding/abstract.asc
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--- pypy/trunk/doc/funding/abstract.asc	(original)
+++ pypy/trunk/doc/funding/abstract.asc	Sun Oct 12 21:53:06 2003
@@ -6,12 +6,12 @@
     of the easiest programming languages to learn and is one of the languages 
     in which one can code up a given algorithm the fastest.  The project
     aims to bring this highly productive language to a wider range of 
-    platforms and devices by giving users easy means to configure a 
+    platforms and devices by giving users simple means to configure a 
     customized language version. 
 
   The approach
 
-    The project will achieve its goals principally by building on the
+    The project will achieve its goals principally by leveraging the
     strengths of the current open source developer community. In
     particular, it will potentiate existing volunteer initiatives that are
     working on novel implementation techniques, working within the current
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@
 
     The new Python will maintain the semantics of the current implementation 
     but will have the following benefits: it will be more easily customised 
-    and extended, it will be more portable, it is expected to be more efficient, 
-    and it will cover more programming paradigms in a way that respects the 
-    simplicity of the underlying language. In addition, the project will 
-    document and refine the existing open source development model in the 
-    Python community. Although targetted principally at Python, most of the
-    techniques will also be applicable to other high level languages.
+    and extended, it will be more portable, more efficient, and it will cover 
+    more programming paradigms in a way that respects the simplicity of the 
+    underlying language. In addition, the project will document and refine the 
+    existing open source development model in the Python community. Although 
+    targetted principally at Python, most of the techniques will also be 
+    applicable to other high level languages.